Annie and Granny
Annie and GrannyA little light skinned girl lived with her grannywhose brown skin shone like copper in the sun.They had a tiny home by Cooper's Creekand oh how Granny loved her darlin' Annie.The...
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An amazing tale you have weaved here, and done professionally my poetess friend.........WRITE ON Heartsong!!Poetic Columnist for Crop & Prop Internationalwww.cropandprop.comPublisher/Editor of...
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Awesome! What a great story.... enjoyed it thoroughly. Very well done....Printed and hung in a play of honor on my fridge (hope that's okay).Regards,Wayne
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Jim...A very charming reply to brighten my day. Thank you. Sue******************"To have great poetry there must be great audiences, too"--Walt Whitman
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As I've mentioned elsewhere, Annie, I really enjoyed this piece. You did a great job with it. Yours, DarkClick on pic for link to my new book
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I'm glad you like this, Dark...but I'm Sue...not Annie...She's the little girl in the poem. Sue******************"To have great poetry there must be great audiences, too"--Walt Whitman
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Hi Sue, Annie, et al.Enjoyable story, as the others have stated.I find an eye-opening glitch in V2-V4... Granddad dies in V2 and comes alive in V4. Perhaps he could be singing in the corn, or some...
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Hi Merlin...Thanks for looking in on this and for letting me know you enjoyed it.V2 speaks of when Annie was a baby after her dad left and her granddad died.V4 is a backflash to granny and granddad's...
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Sheeeeesh. Am I gettin old or what? That was too bad, Ann...oops, I mean Sue. It just doesn't pay to get outta bed some days. Yours, Dark(Laughing so hard I feel down)Click on pic for link to my new...
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hey man...been there, done that...not to worry. Sue******************"To have great poetry there must be great audiences, too"--Walt Whitman
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Being at arm's length from the story, Sue, I would suggest a disconnect there. As a casual reader, it is Granddad who dies, and is resurrected later. Without knowing the precise details it is...
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Merlin...I may have confused by giving too much background in my explanation.Verses 1 and 2 are about Annie's early years and how she and granny came to be living alone.Verse 3...tells about granny...
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Merlin...I made a few changes to verses 3 and 4 that, I hope might make the flashback to an earlier time clearer. Would love your opin. if you get a chance.Sue******************"To have great poetry...
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Wayne...Your charming comments have brightened my day. thank you kindly.Sue******************"To have great poetry there must be great audiences, too"--Walt Whitman
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I had to wake up Rooster cuz he crows the loudest!This is marvelous - a solution I hadn't thought of at all... to make Granddad young again as Thomas. Perfect.The transition is smooth now, from "Thom...
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Thanks for the revisit, Merlin and for offering you always appreciated wisdom. I'm very glad to see you feel my fixes work. Sue******************"To have great poetry there must be great audiences,...
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